Human beings are social animals. No one can live by himself, so friends are essential for everybody. As for as I am concerned, a friend may not be always by your side, but when you have trouble in something, he will come to help you. A friend is someone who will touches your heart when you are in bad mood. A friend is not the one who talks a lot in your daily life, but the one who always gives you support at the right time. A friend is the one who will treat you with true heart instead of insincerity. In one word, friends are important for people.
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Hi Jessie. Unfortunately, it seems you have not kept up with your blog this semester, not yet at least. With only 2 posts out of the required 21, you'd get around 8 or 9 points if the writing were perfect. As it is, it's not too bad, the little I've seen of it, though you need to use a spellchecker and a grammar checker next time. Check phrases like "as far as I'm concerned" and your counting skills in the last sentence.
7% is your grade this time; follow the instructions and get a better grade next period.
Chris O'Brien
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