My favorite thing is doing exercise. There are some advantages existing in doing exercise.First, exercise makes me healthy. Doing exercise lets me get fit. When I get enough exercise, I won’t easily get sick. After all, I become strong. I hope that I'm healthy, because it lets me keep away these diseases. Second, exercise helps me relax my mind. When I do exercise, I won’t think of those unhappy things. Therefore, I am very joyful while doing exercise.If there is only thing that I can do, I can not help but to choose doing exercise. The reason is easy to understand: I love doing exercise.
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In general, your writing is pretty good. There are some mistakes, such as in this post when you don't leave a space after the period. I'll rewrite this post as an example for you.
My favorite thing is doing exercise, for it has several advantages. First, exercise makes me healthy and fit. When I get enough exercise, I don't easily get sick, because I have become stronger than before. Second, exercise helps me to relax my mind; I don't think of unhappy things when I am exercising, so I feel joyful. If I could only choose one thing to do, I would have to choose exercising, because that's what I love best.
Chris O'Brien
Grade: 79
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